Added Quite a Bit

TO THE OPENING SCENE of Armed Citizen. Three pages, as a matter of fact. Fleshed out that opening scene and cleaned up some of the choppier cuts between versions. We no longer have to have the scene exposited from two perspectives. The first version is still high tension and yet doesn’t leave anything out. Feels good.

Say good night, Gracie!

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